Great story boys – I was very worried about Frannie for a moment then! Great choice of words to make it exciting for the reader. Well done 🙂
Great opener really engaged me to read your story
Two of my best friends working together to make an awesome story! Great description! Remember£30.00! Both on 20!
A very exciting story, made me feel quite hungry!!!
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Great story boys – I was very worried about Frannie for a moment then! Great choice of words to make it exciting for the reader. Well done 🙂
Great opener really engaged me to read your story
Two of my best friends working together to make an awesome story! Great description! Remember£30.00! Both on 20!
A very exciting story, made me feel quite hungry!!!