Wow! What a fantastic story you have written! I am very impressed with how well you have used speech and chosen carefully the vocabulary which was most appropriate! Well done 🙂
Some days I wish I could find, ‘ a hypnotising portal…’ that…’ appeared out of nowhere’ 🙂
What a fantastic story, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and it’s made me very hungry! Well done Lewie and Lizzie:D
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Wow! What a fantastic story you have written! I am very impressed with how well you have used speech and chosen carefully the vocabulary which was most appropriate! Well done 🙂
Some days I wish I could find, ‘ a hypnotising portal…’ that…’ appeared out of nowhere’ 🙂
What a fantastic story, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and it’s made me very hungry! Well done Lewie and Lizzie:D