Very interesting start to a story Lex, I wanted to read the rest?! Check out your grammar and punctuation 🙂 very impressed…here is what i think happened next to Max….
When he got to more-lass village he found a McDonalds and bought himself a big mac meal (large with strawberry milkshake). He was so full after his lunch that he felt tired and went back home to sleep!
When he woke in morning it was all a dream…. and he had to go to school anyway!!!! haha
This is an impressive piece of literature as it’s beautifully worded and makes you want to read on. Well done Lexi, you’re a natural.
Very interesting start to a story Lex, I wanted to read the rest?! Check out your grammar and punctuation 🙂 very impressed…here is what i think happened next to Max….
When he got to more-lass village he found a McDonalds and bought himself a big mac meal (large with strawberry milkshake). He was so full after his lunch that he felt tired and went back home to sleep!
When he woke in morning it was all a dream…. and he had to go to school anyway!!!! haha
THE END 🙂