Well done good work
Super writing. You have written a very exciting story. I like how the title deceives the reader into thinking it is all going to be happy. Great twist. Well done.
I love your story you have put lots of adjectives in. Well done. I could read it everyday.
Lucy says: great story you two!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comments are closed.
Well done good work
Super writing. You have written a very exciting story. I like how the title deceives the reader into thinking it is all going to be happy. Great twist. Well done.
I love your story you have put lots of adjectives in. Well done. I could read it everyday.
Lucy says: great story you two!!!!!!!!!!!!