Brilliant boys – A terrifying story! You’ve used lots of speech and alternative openers and adjectives. Well done 🙂
Thank you!
Well done I like the part when the revolting serpent out the ground
Wow boys!! Brilliantly written with lots of descriptive language……..we really felt as if we were there with the BFG! Great team work……keep up the excellent work!
Great idea to use well know mythological figures as part of your story
I remember reading this story myself when I was younger…you really brought it to life again for me Charlie and Max. Thank you
Imaginative and informative!!!
WELL DONE BOYS 🙂
Wow that’s a brilliant story
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Brilliant boys – A terrifying story! You’ve used lots of speech and alternative openers and adjectives. Well done 🙂
Thank you!
Well done I like the part when the revolting serpent out the ground
Wow boys!! Brilliantly written with lots of descriptive language……..we really felt as if we were there with the BFG!
Great team work……keep up the excellent work!
Great idea to use well know mythological figures as part of your story
I remember reading this story myself when I was younger…you really brought it to life again for me Charlie and Max. Thank you
Imaginative and informative!!!
WELL DONE BOYS 🙂
Wow that’s a brilliant story